maandag 22 maart 2010

Human genome project(HGP)


The Human Genome Project was an international scientific research project to determine the sequence of total genes of human being, which was initiated by James D. Watson at the U.S. National Institutes of Health in 1990. Before the starting HGP, researchers studied the genetic makeup of several nonhuman organisms which included the common human gut bacterium Escherichia coli, the fruit fly, and the laboratory mouse. This project was performed by United States of America, United Kingdom, France, German, Japan, and China and finished in 2000. People can benefit from the completely human genome data, such as it will provide a total new perspective for medicine and biotechnology. It also can help man to understand the law of individual development, the difference between human being and the mechanism of how diseases happen. In a word, Human Genome Project is one of the great projects in the world, the enormous genome data looks like an endless gold mine waiting to be dig.
by Shi Shunteng

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  1. The Human Genome Project was an international scientific research project to determine the sequence of total genes of the human being, which was initiated by James D. Watson at the U.S. National Institutes of Health in 1990. Before leave out: the starting HGP, researchers had studied the genetic makeup of several nonhuman organisms which included the common human gut bacterium Escherichia coli, the fruit fly, and the laboratory mouse. This project limited flow: you refer to the HGP, which was not mentioned in the previous sentence and can consequently cause confusion was performed by United States of America, United Kingdom, France, German, Japan, and China and finished in 2000. People can benefit from the completely adjective needed here: complete human genome data, such as it will provide a total new perspective for medicine and biotechnology. It also can help man to understand the laws of individual development, the difference between human beings and the mechanism of how diseases happen. In a word, Human Genome Project is one of the great projects in the world, the enormous genome data looks like an endless gold mine waiting to be dig dug/mined/explored... past participle needed.

    Mind flow when using reference words like 'this'. too many accuracy errors for such a short text. Good single focus. ODP

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