It is well known the use of hallucinogenic plants by numerous cultures worldwide as a mediators between man and his goods. El Peyote, a small cactus without prickles, is an endemic plant from the North of Mexico and South of the United States. Over the years, it has been used by many indigenous communities in spiritual rituals; and as a medicinal plant. Still nowdays an annual pilgrinage is carried out by the Huicholes, a native mexican group, in search of the sacred plant. During the pilgrimage, a series of rituals are performed with the aim to get purified before finding it. El Peyote has been used as a remedy for diabetes, pneumonia, cancer, rheumatism, arthritis, asthma, to increase sexual appetite, to thwart the effects of animals poisoning, among others.
L.LORENA GONZALEZ SANTIN
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